Without You

K

KhmerKid

sarNie Egg
Without You
chapter Nine

They were still in the water. About a few seconds later they popped back back up. When they came out of the water Yaya slapped him
Yaya: Why did You kiss me for?
Nadech: Cause your being a slut!
yaya: That is all you can say with that trashy mouth of yours
Nadech: I love you
Yaya: well I hate you. Get it in your thick ass skull

then she swam back to the shore. and into the house. she got changed into a mini skirt and a t-shirt. she went downstairs to watch tv.
Just then she got a phone call. and right at that moment Nadech walked in.

yaya`s phone call

yaya: hello
weir: hi yaya
yaya: weir How`s the business trip.
weir: actually Im done now. How about you hows your day.
yaya: Mom and dad force me to go on my honeymoon.
weir: it`s not that bad is it?
yaya: noo it`s fine. In your dreams. I have one more week to stay here.
weir: it`s only 7 days or 168 hours or...
Yaya:be quiet Albert Einstein
Weir: ok meany

Just then nadech snatched the phone away.

yaya: give me my phone back.
nadech: Who are you talking to? Oh let`s see. Who else but weir. You slut trying to sell yourself
to other guys. You know if you needed money you could of ask. If you would really sell yourself
you could sold yourself to me. So tell me How much are you worth ?

Yaya slapped him. He could see the tears forming up in her eyes. He knew this time he went to far.

Yaya: I HATE YOU!

she then fell to the ground and fainted

Nadech:yaya! Yaya! Are you ok? I`m sorry.

he kept shaking her but she wouldn`t wake up. He carried her up to his room. He called the doctor
The doctor arrives and takes her pulse and does some tests on her.

Doctor: Congratulations your wife is 4 weeks pregnant. she`ll get her pregnancy symptoms very soon. here I
Prescribed her some medicine already

Nadech: thanks

the doctor leaves.

he hugs yaya in his arms the rest of the night.

The next morning

nadech woke up early to make her some porridge. by the time he walked back in the room she had already awoken from her sleep.
she was trying to get up he helped her up.

nadech: Here have some porridge.

for the next 15-20 minutes they sat there feeding each other like a lovely couple for once.
The first time in their lives that when they see each other`s faces one of them didn`t start a fight with each other.

End of chapter


TO: asy

Thanks for commetting it really makes my day
and encourages me to write. thanks once again.
 
A

Asy

sarNie Immature
No problem, I :heart: your fan fiction though it is simple. :thumbsup: And craving for more...

Haha I thought they will fight before feeding each other. You should put some dialogues there. :thumbup:

Waiting for Win - Kwan update! :)
 
K

KhmerKid

sarNie Egg
Without You
Chapter Ten

Yaya and Nadech have`nt fought in the last few days of their Honeymoon
They wwere actually getting along pretty good. Time passed by so quick.

The Next morning they both packed up. and was on their way home.

Meanwhile Win was getting ready for his plan. This is night He`ll Break her Heart.
Today is Kwan`s Birthday. Win had planned a suprise party for her. Kwan went to her sister`s house to welcome her back from her honeymoon. They arrive just a few moments
later. They walk into the house.

Kwan: P` Yaya

They both hug and then talk about the honeymoon.

Yaya:Happy Birthday! Birthday Girl!
Kwan: Thank you. Oh yeah I almost Forgot This is my Boyfriend
Win.
Win: Sawatdeekap
Yaya: Hi.

Later

The party began. yaya went up to the stage.

Yaya: I just want to say Happy Birthday. I love you

Then Win Came up to speak. Pancake tagged along with him.

Win: Kwan I just want to say that happy Birthday. And What we had was nothing. I just made a bet with someone that just happen to involve with you. Well to get to the point I just hate you and I never want to see your face again. Your ugly ass ever your nothing compared to pancake. How could anyone love a slut like you.I would rather date a frog than you. Why are you alive.

Then he walked out with pancake.But mark had stopped him. Kwan ran out before all of them.

Mark came up to punch Win in the face.

Mark: How could you do this to her.
Win: Well she was stupid enough to fall for it
Mark: If anything happens to her Im going to kill you.
Win: we`ll see.

Outside of the house

Yaya ran outside after her

Yaya: Kwan wait

But she was to late she had already drove off. Yaya Fainted but nadech caught her though.
Kwan drove to the bridge and sat down. Cursing hersself for being so stupid.His words were repeating in her head over and over. She stay there until dawn.

Home

Nadech brought Yaya back home and laid her on the couch. She had awoken a few moments later.
Nadech helped her up.

YAya: Nadech Where`s Kwan.
Nadech : I don`t know
yaya: I`m gonna go find her.
NAdech: hold on
Yaya: Don`t stop me
Nadech: I wasn`t I was gonna say that I`m coming too. Kwan Is my sister too.

They both left It began raining.Kwan was about to faint and was about to fall into the ocean any second.

Mark and Fah

mark and Fah is also looking for Kwan.like kwan
Fah: CAn`t you drive any faster
Mark:well

Suddenly the car stop

Mark: opps Were out of gas
Fah: Oh that is just great isnt it. We`re out of gas in the middle of this stupid bridge
Mark:: Calm down
Fah: are you telling me to calm down? Well If you would of gotten gas we would`nt be in this mess o.k?
Mark: Well you shouldnt of gotten in the car.

She turn facing the window. Then she saw someone who looked like Kwan.

Fah: Mark

AS she slightly tapped him. He saw her looking towards the window so he leaned in closer to get a closer look. The she turned around Giving him a kiss on the lips.Now they`re just staring at each other.Fah broke the kiss and the stare. She opened the door and got out and rushed over to where Kwan is at.Then They took her to the nearby hospital.They called Yaya and Nadech to let them know about it. They rush quickly to the Hospital.

End of Chapter Ten
Hope you enjoyed this update!
 
K

KhmerKid

sarNie Egg
Without You
Chapter Eleven

Yaya , Mark , Nadech and Fah were waiting outside the emergency room waiting for the doctor to come out.
Then the doctor came out.

Yaya: how is my sister doctor?
Doctor: She needs blood she loss a lot of blood.
Yaya: What type of blood
Doctor: Blood type O
Yaya: I have that blood type. I want to give some to my sister.
Nadech: No yaya you can`t.
Yaya: Why can`t I
Nadech: Because you pregnant
Yaya: how do you know this?
Nadech: remember when we went on our honeymoon and we argued. Then you fainted?
So then I called a Doctor and he did some tests and told me you were pregnant.
Yaya: But.. What about Kwan Nadech?

Then someone had walked up to them.
???: I have Blood type O
Yaya: I don`t want your dirty blood in my sister`s veins.
Mint: suit yourself then. Let her die.

Then Yaya pulled Mint into the stair case.

Yaya: What do you want?
Mint: Here`s the deal If I give some of my blood to your sister
you have to get out of Nadech`s life ok deal.
Yaya: Deal. I do anything for my sisters saftly. When can I go.
Mint: When your sister is better. Wait don`t tell Nadech ethier or else
your sister dies.
Yaya: Ok I wo`nt

They came out of the stair case.

Mint: Doctor I`m here to donate blood to kwan.
Nurse: Please come this way thank you.

They finished the operation then they wheeled Mint out of the room.

Mint: Don`t forget
yaya: I won`t
Nadech: What are you guys talking about?
Yaya:: It`s nothing
Yaya: Can we just go see kwan please?
Nadech: yes lets go

Sorry short update just wanted to type a quick chapter

ENJOY
Nadech: what are you guys talking about
 
duaxiong

duaxiong

sarNie Adult
AWW updatee!! ima soo sadd Win is soo MEAN!! :cry1: <_< <_<
I hope KWAN gets her revenge on him! Mark likes KWAN!
 
K

KhmerKid

sarNie Egg
Without You
Chapter Eleven Part ll

Kwan woke up and had already started crying once again. He still could`nt believe this had happen to her. He love him so much but to him it was all a game. He used her. Just the Yaya and Nadech had walked in. Yaya came over to hug Kwan.

Kwan: He used me. He treated me like a playing piece.
Yaya: Well Love does has a lot of sacrifices.
Kwan: How did you find me?
Nadech: Oh you thought we found you. no MArk and fah did.
their car broke down right in the middle of the bridge where
you were at you were bleeding. What happen?
Kwan: I don`t exactly know.
Fah: IT`s ok
Kwan: But I should of known that he didn`t lke me because
When he said he was going to take me to prom. He didn`t show up.
But when we were on a date he would always be late. Mark had
warned me about him but I was to stupid not to believe him.
No one loves me anyways.
Yaya: Don`t say that we love you and mark and fah loves you to.
They will always be there for you no matter what. That what friends
and Families are for. Just talk out your problems.
Kwan: thanks for the lecture mom. I think you two should go home and rest
because I don`t think you guys slept last night did you.
Nadech: Of course we did`nt. We were worried sick about you.
Kwan : for that I`m sorry please go home and get some rest though you
guy look very tired..
Yaya: ok then

They left to the car. But on the way to the car they met pancake and Win.
Pancake: IS she dead yet (referring to Kwan)
Yaya: are you? Look at your make up where did you get it from? the trash can!
PAncake : YOU! (Points directly at her)
Yaya: What
NAdech: honey let`s go
YAYa:: fine.

They left

PAncake: Win I`m gonna go to that resturant and wait for you ok.
Win;ok

So she left. so then he went to the front desk and ask what room kwan is in.
So then he went into her room. He could tell that she was crying there was still soome tear drops on her face. He went to wipe if off. Then she woke up.

Kwan: what are you doing here?
Win: I came here to visit you.
Kwan: I don`t want you to visit me!
Win: Why (touching her hair but she smack his hand)
Kwan: because I hate you I don`t want to see your face ever again
Win: why ( as he got closer)

Then he pushed against the wall.

Kwan: Get off me
win: Here I`ll give you a kiss goodbye

Then He kissed nice and slow.

Win: There !
KWan: I hate you After Graduation you`ll never see my face again
Win: like I care if u go die it would be better.

Meanwhile Mark and fah some how fell asleep in the car in the backseat. Fah was sleeping on Mark`s lap. She woke up first. She was about to get up but mark had awoke. He knew somehow she was already awake. so he pretended to kiss her. Then she pushed him off herself.

TBC>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.
 
A

Asy

sarNie Immature
Win so mean... Oh the sweet face Win is so mean!!! But seriously, their part is interesting. :thumbsup: Update more please!!!
 
K

KhmerKid

sarNie Egg
Without You
Chapter Tweleve

Fah and Mark were still arguing in the car.

Fah: can you just take me home?
Mark: Ok

Mark had brought fah home and went back home. The next day yaya came to visit kwan again along with Nadech.

Kwan: Yaya when can I go home?
Yaya: Oh I forgot. The doctor said you can go home today.
Kwan: Yes finally

yaya wasn`t really happy though because she has to leave right away.

Kwan: What`s wrong?
Yaya: We have to leave here?
Kwan: Why?
Yaya: I promised mint
Kwan: What did you promised her anyways?
Yaya: When you were in the hospital the doctor said that you had
lost a lot of blood so then I asked that can I give you some of my blood.
But then I found out that I`m pregnant and nadech worries. Then Mint came along
saying that if I leave him she`ll give you some of her blood because you guys have
the same type of blood.
Kwan: So it`s my fault. I ruined your life. I hate myself.
yaya: it`s not your fault it was my choice and I love you your the only thing I got left.

Then they hugged and cried and the same time.

Kwan: Yaya where are we moving to anyways.
Yaya: Chiang mai
kwan: we`re moving there today?
Yaya: Yes I promised her as soon as you get better
Kwan: ok then I wanna finish up school here first.
Yaya: our driver nam will drive you back and forth to school everyday ok?
Kwan: ok

They both packed up and left but before they left Yaya had left a letter
for Nadech. It said

Dear Nadech,.

By the time you`re reading this letter I would be gone.
You still would`nt budge When I tried to make you understand
what love is.Our relationship is going no where. You hurt me in
so many ways . There is no room for forgivness. You treat me like a person you hate.
You won`t relize it until I`m gone. I`m sorry that I didn`t say bye

- Yaya

Sorry for short chapter
Hope you enjoyed it!





Kwan
 
K

KhmerKid

sarNie Egg
Without You
Chapter Thirteen

Then They went to their parents house to say goodbye.

Mom: Where will you guys be living?
Yaya: In Chiang Mai
Kwan: Yaya is pregnant
Mom: Really?
Yaya: yes I`m about two months now.
Mom: Well be careful ok you`re not alone now.
Yaya: don`t worry
Kwan: ok we have to leave now
Mom: Hold on here take this

She handed them both a check

Kwan: Khun Mae what is this for?
Mom: It`s just in case you have financial problems.
Yaya: Thank you. And don`t tell anyone except for dad

Then they all hugged. Then they both left and were on
their way to their new home.

Later that day at Nadech`s house. nadech had found yaya`s letter that she wrote.
After reading that he rushed over to her parents house to ask her.

Nadech: Have you seen Yaya lately
Mom: No the last time I saw her was about 2 or 3 weeks ago.
Nadech: oh ok

Then he lefted to go to his parents house.

Nadech: Khun mae have you seen yaya?
Mom: no honey what happen?
Nadech: She lefted me
Mom: did she tell you why?
Nadech: No but she wrote me a note

Then he hand her the note. She read it.

NAdech: I deserved it. I treated her wrong.
Mom: Well in this letter states You were pretty harsh on her.
Nadech: I know what I did was wrong and I will stop at nothing to
find her. I will do anything for her to forgive me.
Mom: Good now go find her.

The next day the driver drove Kwan to school. Since Kwan and win broke up she been hanging out around fah and Mark a lot. As for Win He was getting jealous of Kwan. It was lunch time so they headed to the cAfe to get a bite to eat. He sat One table away from Kwan and Mark.

Win: Look at her. What a slut! I only broke eup with her for a month she is already dating other guys.
Pancake: Well you can`t blame her.
Win: What are you talking about?
Pancake: Oh nothing

Over at the other table Kwan had spill something on herself. So she went into the bathroom. She didn`t notice that Win had followed her until he pushed her in one of the stalls

TBC>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

thought I put Up a quick update
I hope you enjoyed it
 
A

Asy

sarNie Immature
I wish you can write more, heheh. Thanks anyway!
 
K

KhmerKid

sarNie Egg
Just felt like writing a little bit more

Without You
Chapter Fourteen

Kwan: I think Your in the wrong..

She didn`t get to finish her sentance yet. He kissed her. Then she broke
apart.

Kwan: (Wiping her lips) Why did you just kiss me.
Win: because I love you and I want you back
Kwan: well it`s too late. After all that has happened . no
I hate you.

Then she tries to get out of the stall. But Win puts his hand there.
Then he sits on the toilet while she sits on his lap. and he is hugging her.

Win: Listen to me ok. Breaking up with you was a mistake. AT first it was a game but as time passed I started falling for you but by the time I noticed It was too late.
Kwan: I don`t care what you say your just making up excuses aren`t you
Win: I`m not lying though

Then some girls came in. Kwan was about to scream but win kissed her. After the girls lefted he released her and then she pushed him out of the way and ran back to the cafe.

Fah: Kwan What happen?
Kwan: Nothing
Fah: then why are you crying then?
Kwan: umm OH Dirt got in my eye
Fah: Oh

Then finally school was over. Win and Nadech came up to her.

Nadech: Kwan I need to talk to you
Kwan: ok what is it?
Nadech: I can`t find your sister! Do you know where she might be?
Kwan: No I didn`t see her for a while now
Nadech: oh ok

Then he walked away sadly. Just then win grabbed her into his car.

KWAn: What do you wan
Win: I want you. I want you back
Kwan: You blew it you already had your chance
Win: Well can you give me another chance
Kwan: No I hate you and leave me alone

Then she got out of the car and went to her parents house. But first she called Yaya to let her know.

Kwan: Yaya I can`t go home tonight Because I think Nadech and Win Will follow me
Yaya: Why
Kwan: Because I told NAdech: That I don`t know where you are but I
Think he doesn`t trust me. As for Win He says He loves me and breaking
up with me was a big mistake. He keeps following me every where.
YAya: ok then tell Mom I said hi and I love her.
Kwan : ok bye

over the months Kwan had finally given Win a second chance.

Tbc


Author`s Note: This is gonna end soon Only 2 or 3 Chapters left
 
K

KhmerKid

sarNie Egg
Without You
Chapter Fifteen

One night Win went out to drink with his friends. But Pancake happened to be there.
She made him drink a lot until he was drunk. Then she took him to his condo.

Pancake: Your mines now

The next day Pancake sent a text using Win`s phone to come to his condo.
So then Kwan went to his Condo alone to she Pancake and Win in bed together.
Win woke up right in time to see kwan run out. Then he put his pants on and
ran out after her. But she already ran in the elevator. But he caught her
outside the condo.

Win: (grabbed her) Kwan it`s not what you think
Kwan: It is what I think I saw it with my own eyes
Win: Let me explain
Kwan : I hate you after tomorrow you won`t see me ever again!

Then she pushed him on the ground and went into her car and drove away.
She drove to fah`s house.

Fah: Kwan What happened why are you crying.
Kwan didn`t answer
Fah: Let me guess Win right?

JUst then she got a text

Fah: HOld on

She got a text from Kwan saying yes.

Fah: OK first of all stop texting me and talk to me ok
Kwan: ok
Fah: so what happened what did he do this time?
Kwan: This morning he texted me to go to his condo and see him.
But when I reached there I saw him in bed with Pancake.
Fah: omg is he serious I`m gonna go talk to him
Kwan: no it`s ok I only have to see him one more day because
tomorrow is graduation anyways.
FAh: Fine

During the ceremony at school Kwan and a few other people were asked to go
up and speak.

Kwan: This year was a very interesting year for me. I had my ups and downs.
My sad days and happy days. I will miss all of you guys. We had a good year
I guess. wow this year came by fast did`nt it. Well farewell class of 2011

Then everyone clapped and the ceremony was over. Then Kwan headed home.
She didn`t know that win and Nadech had followed her until you pulled into
the driveway. While Win talked to Kwan Nadech Rushed inside the house.

Nadech: Yaya
Yaya: Nadech how did you find me ?
NAdech: I went to Kwan`s graduation today. Then I followed her here
Yaya: She graduated She didn`t tell me
Nadech: Well I don`t know that but Why did you leave me?
Yaya: Because..
NAdech" Because of what tell me
Yaya: Remember when Mint needed to talk to me. She said that If I
get away from you she`ll donate blood for kwan. And if I told you
she`ll kill me and Kwan.

THen someone walked in.

Mint: and yes I will. I already shot Kwan I`ll Shoot you too.

Then she shot Yaya.

Mint: Then she started Laughing until the cops came.
Cop: Put your hands up behind your head.
Mint: NO Yaya this is all your Fault.

Then she tries to shoot her again but the cops shot her.
The ambulance took Yaya And Kwan to the hospital.
And win And Nadech followed.They were brought to the emergency room
They all waited outside. FAh and Mark arrived a few moments later.

End Of Chapter
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