@chaitra,
Thank you so much for writing this wonderful fan fiction and for sharing your talents, precious time, and efforts with us here. You are a very good writer; your story flows very well and at a good pace. The story is intriguing, and the characters are well developed and thought out.
You are interested in science and that’s just wonderful. You will make an awesome scientist or a good doctor, nurse, or pharmacist if you are interested in medicine.
Now about this FF, you are great at describing and giving thoroughly detailed situations. I felt like I was there myself, witnessing, and participating in many scenes. For example; Yadech’s dancing class, I could imagine myself dancing to those steps even though I have two left feet.
I’m glad Yadech didn’t do the deed because I want their blessed union to be free of Michael’s threat and blackmailing. I wanted their first time to be beautiful and not regretting afterward because they cannot be together since Yaya is
still engaged to Michael, and he still has control over her.
Mae Keaw is such a sweet loving and understanding mother and I’m glad she is always there for Nadech; especially at his lowest point.
Michael, what an arse! Up until chapter 40, I still give him a benefit of a doubt, but he turns out to be more evil than I thought. I couldn’t believe he would harm someone that his sister cares so much about, and who in the hell let your fiancée spending the night with another man. He is pure evil and very good at it too. I cannot handle or tolerate a guy slapping a woman, and I felt so bad for Yaya when Michael did that to her.
The last several chapters really hit the climax like a roller coaster ride with so much anxiety and emotion. I felt like I was watching a drama with split screens playing out Nadech’s and Yara’s helpless lives scene by scene in a parallel motion. That’s very sad, indeed.
Last but not least. Yadech’s love and I will quote Yaya’s definition of love from Oops article here:
“Love is a feeling towards a person that no matter what, you will always stand by him/her and you can sacrifice for the person.”
This would sum up Yadech’s love in this FF.
Can’t wait to read more!!!
Once again, thank you so much for your love and support for Yadech and your dedication to this FF.