~IN WONDERLAND~ ::AUM/AFF::

SethT

anie's bb [c] D=
MUAHHAHAHAAH, guess what? guess who the n'rai in this lakorn will be?.....

































































ME!!! MUAHAHA JAOFAR BAUBAU IS THE NANG'RAI IN THIS FICTION LOL!
*98 i didnt spoil the story did i?
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
MUAHHAHAHAAH, guess what? guess who the n'rai in this lakorn will be?.....
ME!!! MUAHAHA JAOFAR BAUBAU IS THE NANG'RAI IN THIS FICTION LOL!
*98 i didnt spoil the story did i?
lol no you didn't LMAO....you are so excited aren't you....yes it's confirmed..bau is the n'rai....bau=bua chompoo^^
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
A SHORT BEGINNING (IDK...BE WARN?...LOL):

the sun, beating on the chest of his naked body. sweat dripping from his arms. hot flesh rubbing against each other, no room left to escape. a soft moan here and there. the window they are by begins to steams up, like in the movie titantic. even if it's for a moment, the feeling was sensational. afraid that they would get caught made it all the more tempting. they tried to stop before, but couldn't, the desire was too strong. as their lips withdrew from each other, they would take deep breaths in, readying themselves to begin again. their love was forbidden, which made this very moment all the more sweeter........

--TBC--

LOL whoa..sorry..i tried to keep it PG-13 right now^^ yeah..so AN sorry if this is getting too weird for you..if you object...just tell me ok^^
 

cutefuzzy

maplestory addict xD
A SHORT BEGINNING (IDK...BE WARN?...LOL):

the sun, beating on the chest of his naked body. sweat dripping from his arms. hot flesh rubbing against each other, no room left to escape. a soft moan here and there. the window they are by begins to steams up, like in the movie titantic. even if it's for a moment, the feeling was sensational. afraid that they would get caught made it all the more tempting. they tried to stop before, but couldn't, the desire was too strong. as their lips withdrew from each other, they would take deep breaths in, readying themselves to begin again. their love was forbidden, which made this very moment all the more sweeter........

--TBC--

LOL whoa..sorry..i tried to keep it PG-13 right now^^ yeah..so AN sorry if this is getting too weird for you..if you object...just tell me ok^^
omg...its so HAWT...i super love it :drool: ...*cough* SarN and Ami too...*cough*
 

sindu17

sarNie Hatchling
no objections here :lol: ...can't wait for the fic...steamy parts and all
 

hanjieun30

sarNie OldFart
their love was forbidden, which made this very moment all the more sweeter........
this line really intrigued me...forbidden love??? are they brother and sister that's why it's forbidden???
incest!!!
hahahahaha...

you better update soon rr...my imagination is starting to get wild... :p
 

amikrazie

sarNie Oldmaid
LOL rahut...that was such a tease!!!


hmmm...i did started another brainstorm of my-so-call fic * the other one never gotten farther than just

p'ek-- blah blah
n'ek --blah blah

i have like a short synopsis going too...hmmmm although i still cant seem to decide on the title yet..still thinking of one.

...cause work was slow today..i might get chapter one done tomorrow cause it looks like another slow day for me. lol
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
i think its going to be pg18 soon..lol
LOL...could be heehee

rr ur off to a great steamy start.....
thanks..hmmm pze..what about you??

no objections here :lol: ...can't wait for the fic...steamy parts and all
going to write more...but right now it's almost the end of school...lol and so much lakorns, FANFICS, work, JLR, school, summer--will be a HOT one heehee

this line really intrigued me...forbidden love??? are they brother and sister that's why it's forbidden???
incest!!!
hahahahaha...

you better update soon rr...my imagination is starting to get wild... :p
eww...lol...forbidden--idk--i'll let you imagination go wild...then i will update LOL

forbidden fruit LMAO!!
yes! forbidden fruit....lol there will be a passion fruit too heehee
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
LOL rahut...that was such a tease!!!
hmmm...i did started another brainstorm of my-so-call fic * the other one never gotten farther than just

p'ek-- blah blah
n'ek --blah blah

i have like a short synopsis going too...hmmmm although i still cant seem to decide on the title yet..still thinking of one.

...cause work was slow today..i might get chapter one done tomorrow cause it looks like another slow day for me. lol
me....a tease....never...hmmm maybe aum's though lol i LOVE your beginning to your fanfic heehee
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
UPDATE (continuation lol...be warn again):

their fingers dangling onto each other, their bodies becoming one, their everything has been combined together. he softly sniffs her neck. delicious he thought. never had he felt this way before about anyone. she never did either. her body was going insane for the intensity of this. this continues for hours, non-stop. both of them together, under the sun. in the hidden part of the shade, where no one could see who they were. if anyone found out, surely they would never see each other again..

---hours pass---

escaping their last bit of passion, they FINALLY stop. gasping for air after that work-out (surely they lost a few pounds) they just lie there looking at each other, they both leaned in for a kiss. after they both stop themselves for making this go further again. staring at each other's complexion, soon after, they fell asleep facing each other, smiling....


TBC
 
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