Jamleuy Ruk (Makers Group)

Raiya

Raiya

sarNie Adult
MOH dang girl i was suppose to own the page!!! LOL girl now i gotta spam for a whole page to get the next one! 55555+
 
Raiya

Raiya

sarNie Adult
cecilia said:
^raiya, update it .. i wanna read.
all you fiction writers, need to update.
stop making me deprive from such sweet moment.
my head can't imagine anymore waiting here :loool:
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Ceci! I'll try to work on it tonight! ^_^

Thanks for motivation!!!
 
sarN

sarN

sarNie Granny
cecilia said:
RAIYA. i love that short cap story.

okay, i suck at writing stuff,
i can only read/edit/copy/paste and credit.Lol
HERE goes the short cheesy story inspire by sarN's cap and RAIYA's story.


'SORIYA, I know, what i did to you at the island is unforgivable.
let me tell you, it's the best experience i had in my entire life.
I know, i'm not as good as NUKHUL but i just wanna say:
If there's one face I want to see,
so beautiful, so true,
one smile that makes a difference,
to everything I do.

If there's one touch I long to feel,
one voice I long to hear,
whenever I am happy,
or just needing someone near.

If there's one joy, one love,
from which I never want to part,
it's you, my very special love,
my world, my life, my heart.
Credit:John Ragland@lovepoemsandquotes

Stunned at hearing Harith blurting out love poem,
she silently gave him the confuse look.
What in the world has HARITH come to,
win her over after what he did to her at the cave
She once blamed it to the weather and the JLR sisters for helping Harith trap
her at the cave day in and day out but after hearing such out of nowhere poem
from HARITH, she can't help but wonder. What has got into him.

Harith, feeling like an idiot, confuse, waiting patiently for her response
Still no reaction from his ladylove, he needs a second back up plan but what?
there's nothing to show how much he care for her after she left him at the island.
1st cheesy poem didn't work, now what? ..
try another one, working hard to earn that special spot in her life?

Soriya can't bear his cheesiness anymore, she walk away from him without
giving him a response. What he just did is not enough for her to forgive him.
Not even for a minute. Leaving Harith behind as a smile form on her face.
Harith turn around in anxiety, wondering what he should do next. Fine, he's
not that sadistic so to prove it to her, he quickly run after Soriya, grab her hand, turn her around
and close his eyes for a second. Slowly, he look up at Soriya, not knowing where to start.
Should he use the poem or not-thoughts of debate running through his head, he does not want
to sound too desperate either but what can he do. Woman love them love lines, he can't let her go.
Not this time. He cupped her face with his hands and slowly read the poem to her.
''You are not the air that I breathe,
you are the sweet scent that drifts upon it

You are not the sounds that I hear,
you are the music of my life

You are not the food that I need,
you are the nourishment of my soul

You are not my will to survive,
you are my reason for living

It is with you that I experience
the wonders of the world

It is with you that I triumph
over the challenges in my path

It is your partnership that will lead me
to the fulfillment of my dreams

It is your friendship that guides me
as I grow and learn

It is your patience and wisdom
that calms my restless nature

It is through you that I know my true self

I do not take you for granted,
I cherish you

I do not need you
I choose you

I choose you today in witness
of all the people who love us

I choose you tomorrow
in the privacy of our hearts

I choose you in strength and weakness

I choose you in health and sickness

I choose you in joy and sorrow

I will choose you, over all others, every day
for all the days of my life
- Submitted by: Rebecca W. -


Soriya was blushing like crazy. She thought that he wrote all those just for her.
She can't help how she feel now. It's like her mind telling her not to do this but her
body is reacting to it differently. And it doesn't help either when his hands are at her cheek.
She grab his and and shyly look at him. She gave him a smile. He took it as a signal, saying that
she forgave him. He smile back and hug her tightly, thanking her for giving him a second chance.
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:wub: i feel the goose bump while reading it hahaha . In the mood to write fiction just reading it girl
 
Raiya

Raiya

sarNie Adult
ooOOOooo Mae Sarn you gonna update?!?! Wow wow wow go Ceci!!! Girl you gotta of us in the writing mood now!!! LOL
 
cecilia

cecilia

Staff member
^RAIYA, go for it. for me, i left the island(JLR) to the heaven(SB) but draw away to mulang(FTLY) now swam my way back to my island.(JLR). :loool:
 
sarahvang

sarahvang

sarNie Elites
i lov the caps sarn!!!!!!!!!! thanks a bunch!!! i really need to buy the dvd versionof JLR so i can make good quality MV
S HAHAH ^_^ :p
 
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margaretthao4

sarNie Adult
blues clues i super heart you.
cant wait to see our autographs! woo whooo..
getting too excited thinking about it!

jlr is like krit...it keeps drawing you in.
its ok the first time, second time its like woo, third time it's WAAAAA and then you know your hooked!
 
Raiya

Raiya

sarNie Adult
More caps that i love...



She thought back to their last time together...



He was sweet, kind, and humble...



Could she forgive him...he had hurt her so much.



But she loved him anyways...
 
Raiya

Raiya

sarNie Adult
ice_creamgirl04 said:
blues clues i super heart you.
cant wait to see our autographs! woo whooo..
getting too excited thinking about it!

jlr is like krit...it keeps drawing you in.
its ok the first time, second time its like woo, third time it's WAAAAA and then you know your hooked!
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Awww Killa i heart you back! Yes those pics and autograph makes we want to faint
then be jealous of ami

dang it she got to hug him whaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!
 
cecilia

cecilia

Staff member
Moh, i suppose, the trademark left a BIG FOOTPRINT in my heart that's why i can't recover from this fever.

RAIYA, love the captions .. Where's the autograph?

ah, here, i got another one .. going on a capping spree tonight. LOl

Fate have play it part. Giving me numerous
amount of opportunities to get to know you.
Loving you is not a mistake that i regret
but letting you go is one that i will try to avoid.
How will i endure the days here alone with the sisters
without you. What i want is you. and only you.
THE SWEET TASTE OF STRAWBERRY will
NEVER taste the same without you.

--- okay, took this from a poem :p

You leave me wanting nothing more
than wanting more of you.

- Jeff Gastman -

-- a bit cheesy :blush:
 
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