My Enemy

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
damn!!!!!!!!! That means, Patta will continue to pretend to be Rosa's son?

Oh boy...... I feel so bad for Rosa!
And.. Aff... did Aff see her brother's thingy? haha...
 

cecilia

Staff member
^lady, you just have to mention that..
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they were cover .. or so i thought ? ..
otherwise, what a scene
 

sarN

sarNie Granny
Aff excuse herself to wait in the living room because she doesn't want to be in their family business while Linda and her mother talk it out in the another room. She can still hear the two arguing as she make her way down the stair and into the living room. The quarrel between the two was out of earshot as she sit quietly on the sofa and try to keep herself distracted with magazine --- but it was impossible for her not to think what just happen! He is healthy and a decent looking guy, why would he do such a thing for a living? Worst of all …these woman is nearly twice his age and perhaps old enough to be his mother! He a waste of man strength to choose such a degrading career and his ego is another bad quality! Suddenly, she had flash back of his amusing smile …as if he it's a game to him to see people hurt!!

"thinking about me " Patta interrupted and walk in while buttoning his shirt

"excuse me ?"she shot up at the man that was standing above her , then quickly look away until he finish dressing himself. What an ass , she thought ! As if the world hadn't found out he was just making love to some old lady a couple minute ago !

"you probable thinking im a poor excuse for a man ? ?"

"yes , exactly . I should give u a cookie"

He smile in amuse and said "im old enough to be your brother "

"i wouldn't want you as a brother anyway"

"be careful , wishful thinking tend to come true"he chuckle and saw the serious look in her face. He wonder how will she look like if found out he is her half brother? He decided to keep the little secret to himself and move to sit on the sofa across from her .

Her eye follows him and glances away once he turn to watch her. There was something different about this girl, thought Patta. It seen like yesterday she was only 4 years old and now at 18 she had out grown those baby fat. He remember when she was a little brat running around in the green house knocking over his flower pot and she would bit his finger every time he lift her up into his arm and pinch her nose .

"stop looking at me, you old geezer .." she shouted . She was aware of his starring and was uncomfortable to be watch by this old man ! Surely , his intention is her body because what else can a man like him think of ? !

"did I bother you ? I was thinking of old time "

"yeah right. You head is full of perverted thought ~!!.."

" little girl , what make you say that"

"what else is on a male escort mind beside.." she stop and turn away not wanting to finish her statement because it only damage her image to be talking with a guy like him.

He chuckle and finish the sentence "sex and money"

"you say it so lightly, aren't you embarrass or ashame of yourself ? You look like a smart man and there hundred of jobs out there...why ? why..would you choose this path ?"

"it none of your business "

"is it the money ?"

"does it really bother you who I sleep with or who money I spend ? Are you jealous for all the younger women out there ?"

"Jealous ?!! What the hell you talking about ~~"

"why else would you bother to care ? unless you are jealous that I prefer older women than little girl ??" he smile in amuse while Aff was boiling inside !! She reach for a pillow from behind her back and throw it at him . The man whore thinks he a god gift to women ..or something ? Surely, any girls that fall for this gigolo will have to wear a bag over their head when goes out in public unless they want to get their heart rip out by his sugar moms !!!

Patta dock the pillow and rise from the sofa to leave the room but turn around to add "see you in Chiang Mai" he walk out the house .

Aff was confuse by his last comment and shouted from behind him "what the hell you talking about ??"
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
......hmmm.... since Aff and Patta are related... I wonder who the nang'aek is? Or perhaps, Aff isn't really his half sister? One of the old cows could have had affair??

But for now, my concern is for Patta. Saipoon is clouding his head with hate that he's becoming what his father and step mothers are... heartless.
 

pze

sarNie Adult
sarn continue more sounds like drama is on its way....gosh i cant wait to see wat saipoon is gonna have him do....cant wait for the fathers reaction either.....
 

nikki1786

LizQuen
......hmmm.... since Aff and Patta are related... I wonder who the nang'aek is? Or perhaps, Aff isn't really his half sister? One of the old cows could have had affair??

But for now, my concern is for Patta. Saipoon is clouding his head with hate that he's becoming what his father and step mothers are... heartless.

i was thinking that they'll have love triangles here.... mmm.... if its incest story... i'll be more interesting to hear about it... :D
 

sarN

sarNie Granny
One week later Patta and his mother arrive at Chiang Mai. Before they enter the house Saipoon instructed Patta to call her Nana, with the new name and her Madam appearance , surely nobody will recognize her as Saipoon !! The scarf face servant that once live in this hell hole finally return and with vengeance.

"excuse me sir ..who are you looking for "? one of the servant asked

"my father ..Mr. Taksorn"? reply Patta

The servant was startle, then quickly ran in the house to report the news to Mr. Taksorn and his two wives . Patta and his mom was greeted at the door by Pim , who escort them to the living room where everyone await . Kaping and Palin was in shock once they saw the young man appear before them and couldn't believe Patta had grown up to be so handsome ! There something in his feature that screams out lust as the two wives secretly admire his manly body that shape his aspect .

Patta stop once he saw Mr. Taksorn sitting on the sofa before him . The beast age quickly , his hair was completely white and the wrinkle on his face outline his years of stress . Patta goes down on the floor with his leg fold and put his hand together to bow in front of him. When he lift his head up there was nothing but cold expression on the old man face, the beast never change .

"it been years, isn't it ? I hardly recognize you at all . Tell me , why you bother to come back at all ?"

"because ..i miss my mother "

Mr.Taksorn was silent, 14 years ago he live with his real mom and why suddenly he came back for Rosa ? "your mother ? what happen.." he restrain himself from revealing the truth but his eye was talking to his son . It was question about Saipoon where about .


Patta knew what he meant and decided to play the game with his father "..she dead .."? he lie and then search his father face for any sign of sadden but the old man remain cold .

"it probable for the best and who is that lady standing behind you" Mr. Taksorn narrow his eye , there was something familiar about her feature but he wasn't sure where he met her before ?

"her name is Nana , my care taker. She is like my second mother and I ask her to come long with me"

"Nana ? So all these years you were living with her ?"

"yes, she adopted me as her son and I work for her ever since"

Kaping and Palin thought Nana look awfully familiar but they too can't remember where they seen her from ? The two wives felt a bit of negative vibe from Nana because she was glaring at them as if they are her enemy. They immediately dislike Nana and turn their attention to their stepson , a charming young man he grown up to be ! If only they know he became this attractive, perhaps when he was younger they would had treated him more nicely!! Nana smile slightly and was aware of how mouth watering the two bitch had became while starring at her son, perhaps she can use this finding to her advantage .

"very well, you can stay..beside you are my son and Rosa been sick ever since you were gone. She suffer to long and honestly I pity her so much. If letting you stay will improve her health i's a risk I'll take" Mr. Taksorn expression was harden and serious . There is a hidden meaning in his sentence and Patta understood it clearly , that his father is willing to risk taking him back as a son to exchange for Rosa ‘s life . If it wasn’t for Rosa , there no way Mr. Taksorn is willing to take him back into the house and jeopardize himself …because he sense something dark and evil about Patta ...

"thank you"

Mr. Taksorn call the servant to prepare two guest room in the main house and take the luggage to those room. Patta rise from the floor and ask his father where is Rosa ? Mr. Taksorn was silent , wondering if Patta really came here to see Rosa or have other hidden motive ?

Kaping happily answer the question when she notice Mr. Taksorn wasn't telling the young man where his mother where about "she stay in Little house, been there for 10 years"

Palin was a bit annoy with Kaping hogging the conversation and offer to take Patta to the house in the back . Mr. Taksorn clear his throat and tell one of the servant to take Patta instead . The two wives was disappointed and left the living room while.

Patta and Nana follow the servant out to the back yard . They make their way on the side walk that wrap around the main house like a snake river . Patta saw the green house from the distance and wonder if his flower is still there ? The land scrape had change a lots over the year and he was surprise that his father didn't torn down the green house after he left . The servant open the Little house and everyone walk inside.

Rosa was sitting on a rocking chair like a stone out person while a young girl sitting on the floor besides her reading a Buddha bible out loud. Rosa age rapidly than Mr. Taksorn , her hair was puff and uncombed like a mad woman . The sunlight that beam throw the window reveal the gray hair and wrinkle skin on her face --- there was something sad about her expression and Patta knew it was because of --- no ! He immediately erase the pity thought from his mind and approach the couple before him .

Aff stop reading and quickly rise from the floor like a sparkle of fire "what the hell you doing in Mother Rosa's house !"

Patta ignore her and came to stand in front of Rosa "mom..im back"

Rosa roll her eye up into the young man face ..there was a moment of silent as she search thru her memory . She smile in tear and couldn't believe it was him . O' how she waited for the day her son came home ! Her lip tremble to speak but word wouldn't come out and her shakily hand reach up to care his face, outlining his jaw . It was like a dream that felt so real and she want it to last , fearing if she wake up the young man will disappear! "it..really..you"

"yes, it me ..your son"

Rosa sigh heavily while tear stream down her face and then she move off the rocking chair to embrace her son. "patta ..i miss you soo much, don't ever leave this old lady again ..promise me now"

Patta nodded his head and hug her tightly back. He probable can fight the feeling but he can't deny the bond he felt .. a motherly love he long for but forgotten. Suddenly he remember his intention for coming back and glance over to Nana , who wickedly smile at Patta to continue on with his good son act.

"this is outrage !!" said Aff .The man whore is..her long lost half brother !! It's a small world indeed !!
 

pze

sarNie Adult
i was waiting to read wat was going to happen between aff n patta....do continue....she finally knows who he is now.....
 

sarN

sarNie Granny
The next couple weeks Patta play the perfect son, he watches over Rosa and encourage her to take the medicine the doctor recommended but it been 10 years that she fell sick it will take time for her to heal . The doctor came for Rosa's monthly check up and was surprise how much her health was improving!

Mr.Taksorn was please and thought, perhaps he was thinking to much? He started to loosen his guard and test Patta by offering work at the plantation. Patta didn't object and work there during the day time with the other worker. At the plantation was hard labor and worker always out in the sun because mining diamond take time and patient. Nana want Patta to flaunt his body at the drooling bitch when ever he have a chance and Patta does as he was told with no complaint .

Everyday around noon when he return from a hard day at work, he notice the two wives always sit in the resting area out in the front yard ---waiting for him . He decided to use the hot sun as an excuse to take off his shirt when coming home from work.

"o'my lord .."? Kaping nearly fainted as she watch the shirtless man jogging around the house from the window of her room . His young muscular body was screaming to be touch, she thought and sigh silently to herself .

"mom !!"? shouted Aff . She been standing behind her mother for over 5min and observe her behavior silently.

Kaping was startle and quickly turn around to meet her daughter "dear god !! What is it !! You scar the hell out of me "

"I been watching you this pass couple days ....do you like him ? "

"crazy! He my step son , your brother !! "

"but how come when you and mother palin is around him"? Aff stopped herself and saw the shocking expression from her mother .

"how dare you insult your own mother like this ! Im nearly his mother age ! "

Aff bit her lip to hold the secret inside. If only they know Patta is a male escort and prey after rich old women , perhaps then, they can control their zest when around him!! It was getting to obvious, now the servant in the house begin to make rumor about Mr. Taksorn's wives is having the hots for their own step-son.

Aff wasn't to happy about the changes in her mother behavior and decided to confront Patta . She went to the Little house and saw him coming out the door . She block his path and said

"stop flirting with my mothers !!"

"what are you talking about little girl"

"don't use your scandalous life style in my house !!!"

"Your mother and Palin is like an elder figure to me . I wouldn't dare .." he smile and walk away .

Aff want to scream her lung out and pretend Patta was the grass beneath her feet. She stomp the ground angrily and kick thin air !! When Patta return back into his room , Nana was sitting on the bed waiting for him

"ts time"

"what you want me to do next "

"I want you to seduce Kaping and Palin . Just pretend they're your customer ..can you do that for mommy ?"

"yes , anything you wishes . I'll do it"
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
what Saipoon is doing, does not compare to what had happened to her....... she's using her own son to hurt people. Now that is beyond evil... more evil than what the old cows ever did.
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
Oh Gosh.. I hope madam Saipoon doesn't make Patta sleep with Kaping and Palin. That'll be just ... disgusting. If Saipoon does that, then I would really hate her. And I really hope Saipoon leaves little Aff out of her revenge.

Ughh... I used to back Saipoon up, but now.. she's disgusting!
 

pze

sarNie Adult
saipoon is just disgusting....iono wat to say......but do keep writing...the more the better....hehe....
 

sarN

sarNie Granny
"Remember, those wives are our enemy. They wanted to kill you and hurt me. Your father is a bastard who preys on innocent woman, he turn me into this person and you must help me revenge all of them. Your father doesn't love you and never accept you as his son. The only reason he take you in is because of Rosa . Don't forget how badly he treated you for 16 years .Now, it our turn to crush them . You must seduce those bitches ...make them fall in love with you and let them fight among each other for your affection"

"yes mother"

"as for Rosa , you must let her take this medicine ." Nana handed a bottle of pill to him .

"what is this ?"

"let her take it everyday . Its call methamphetamine a type of drug that make people hallucinations and delusions. She need to stay insane for you to stay in this house"

"will this drug kill her ?"

"no , death is to easy for our enemy"

"no problem, I'll be sure she take it daily"

"that's my boy ! I want to hurt all of them mentally, right in the center of their heart . I want to see your father 's face when he found out his wives is lusting after younger man and worst of all..his own son. It a little taste of his own medicine !!" Nana laugh wickedly at the thought and walk out the room .

Patta stood there holding the medicine bottle and thought about the plan he must carry out . It's his mother wishes and he must follow thur without any complaint or objection. The past 14 years it had always been him and Saipoon , though life as a male escorts bring them wealth and luxuries but it was never enough for Saipoon. Patta thought he fall as a son because he can not fulfill those gap in her heart . So, he promise what ever she want , if not out of his reach he will do it. Saipoon wanted revenge and the only person she can relies on is him. Without any hesitation, Patta blindly agreed and grow to hate everything his mother dislike.

Later that week , Lilly and Sorna came to visit their parent because they heard Patta had return home. They had got married and move out the house for many years . They were thrill to meet their brother after so many years

"I can't believe this , you look so different from what I remember" exclaim Lilly

"are you marry ? have a girlfriend? kids ?"? asked Sorna

"no, single . I been living with Ms.Nana and work for her . It nice to see you two again"

The 3 talk about their childhood memory and bring up old time . Patta laugh with them and tease them about getting marry so late into their 20's . The two sister response by calling him an old man because he nearly 30 and doesn't have a girlfriend! It had always been like this since they where kids, their brother and sister relationship was very close . Even though they are from differ mother but they treated each other as they were one and Patta was happy to see them again . He had always thought about them over the years --- suddenly he remember his revenge and felt a rush of sympathize toward his sister but the feeling quickly dissolve. He only going hurt the first generation -- not the second.

"P'Lilly ! P'Sorna!!.."? cries Aff and run toward them with her arm open to embrace her sister and then Lilly. They was surprise how much Aff had grown too and they tease her of being so tomboyish!

Patta watch the 3 sister laugh and tease each other. The girls have a wonderful relationship but to bad …all will goes in smoke. Suddenly, Patta saw someone lurking behind the bushes and he smile knowing who it is . He excuse himself and walk across the yard into the garden maze , out of eye sight of his sister .

"hello, Ms.Palin"? his voice came from behind her .

Palin was startle and quickly turn around. She been spying on him from behind the garden maze for a while now. She know its wrong to have such feeling toward her own stepson but it hard to resist those handsome feature and heart throbbing body of his .

â"I..I..was just checking out the plants "? she lie and try to escapes his questioning eye but before she can run , Patt reach out to grab her arm . She stop and turn toward him, those seductive smile that shape his lip was shooting fire down her loin .

"not so fast, lets talk"

"it not right ..we are alone in a hidden area ..servant will gossip if they see us together"

"why would they ? its normal for a mother and son to talk..right ? Unless your feeling as an elder figure had change to something ..else?"

Palin was embarrass for her sudden out blurts "I mean ...yeah I was thinking to much into this ..its nothing ..nothing really ..we can talk"

Patta pull her closer so the gap between them was less than a mother and son should be. He stare down her lip and farer down her blouse and he can sense the womanly need by the sound of her heart beating . He smile knowing the affect he had on this old lady and wrap his arm around her .

"is it ok if I want to hug you .. like this"

"I..I.." she stammer and gasp once his lip touch her neck. She felt excited and want to push them down on the ground but she must restrain her self .

"you are beautiful "

"im old "?

"who say, wine taste better when it age .."he chuckle and drop his hand to grab one of her butt cheek . Then he push himself forward so his front was brushing against her .

"o'my god "? she close her eye to the ecstasy of his muscular frame pressing hard against her small body .

"there more ..if you come to my room ." he whisper into her ear and then release her body . He walk out of the garden maze and back into the house .
 
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