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Hey there...great song idea. I love to write about off topic things with AV's lyrics too! Its not always about love..love..love..lol and I have always stressed that with my boys/girl.
Mai, try to rhyme it. I know its hard as hell, but it will flow so much better if you rhyme it.
Myself, once I think of a topic and put myself in that situation, then I can write up the song. And it was really hard at first becaus eof the hmong rhyming, but it gets easier after a few songs. Right now I am currently finishing up AV's lyrics. We have a few various subject matters, BUT.......the one I would like for you girls to help me with is the one lyric below. See... the boys of Av thinks the song is too derogatory and offensive for them because they have an issue with the word Txiv Dev....The song is called "Txiv Dev", but I and MS. Angel feels that its not all that bad.
It's just about a player who just picked on the wrong girl who happens to know his background and thinks he' nothing but a txiv Dev. Let me know what you girls think. The music should be in place shortly. Its set to R&B/Hip Hop sort of music. It will be included in AV's first album.
So my question is this......do you girls think it is offensive to use the word "Txiv Dev"? I feel that the word is just a word, but others might get offended by it.
Txiv Dev
Nws hnav khaub ncaws
Cob cob xub
Coj saws ci nplab
Nrog lub tsom iav dub
Oh lub qhov muag
Ntsia ntsoov txhua tus
Xav nrhiav dua tus tshiab
Los deev nwssiab…Txua mo…s txua hnub
Uh o niag txiv dev tsov ntawv lau
Ah ha nws tseem siv pib dua ib taj
Thaum twg nws mam li paub
Niag neeg zoo li ntawv
Tsis muaj leej twg xav tau
Uh o niag txiv dev tsov ntawv lau
Ah ha nws tseem siv pib dua ib taj
Txog twg los muaj…. thaum twg
Dag rau tus ub tus no
Tias nws… yuav hlub
Thaum nws siv tag …
Ces muab luag tso
Ua txuj tsis paub
Thiab rog…. nco txog
Uh o niag txiv dev tsov ntawv lau
Ah ha nws tseem siv pib dua ib taj
Chorus:
Thaum twg nws mam li paub
Niag neeg zoo li ntawv
Tsis muaj leej twg xav tau
Uh o niag txiv dev tsov ntawv lau
Ah ha nws tseem siv pib dua ib taj
Yog li tias tej tub hluas no mas
Tsis paub hais li lawm os
Zoo nraug los… txwj pwm twb tsis zoo kiag li es
Cas yuav khav teeb ua luaj li thiab lau
(Verse)
Tsis muaj leng tws
Yuav hais thau nws..
Sawdaw vws tas
Vim nws ibleng xwb….
Mus dhau tus no
Tseem saib kawg dua tus tshiab
Tsis paub txaj muag
tsam luag tej ntsia
Uh o niag txiv dev tsov tom lau
Ah ha nws tseem siv pib dua ib taj
(Man)
Uh-oh koj twb tsis paub kuv thiab los
Ah-ha koj yog tus kuv xav tham
Thaum twg koj mam li paub
Neeg ntxim hlub zoo li koj
Kuv xa..av tau
(woman)
Uh o niag txiv dev tsov tom lau
Ah ha nws tseem siv pib dua ib taj
(Man)
Uh-o koj twb tsis paub kuv thiab los
Ah-ha koj yog tus kuv xav tham
Tig loskiag tsis txho…b ntxub
Vim koj yog tusneeg kuv xa…v hlub
(woman)
Uh o niag txiv dev tsov tom lau
Ah ha nws tseem siv pib dua ib taj
(Man )
Txhob chim rau kuv
Well...I would appreciate you girls help so that I can change the wording if need be.
Thanks!
PC Vaj