The February Ladies::[Rita/Ann/Aff]
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hanjieun30
sarNie OldFart
DELETED! scroll down to read the new chapter 1! ^_^
hanjieun30
sarNie OldFart
rita's story would definitely start on the next chapter...
transcend89
sarNie Adult
wow love it so interesting good and fun a new obsession for me please a couple more chapters yah i like how all the girls know each other and so many hot guys to chose lol
lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
ohh.. so all the three ladies are friends? ... I wonder what of emergency Rita has......
hanjieun30
sarNie OldFart
yes! the three of them are friends...
hanjieun30
sarNie OldFart
**EDIT**
oops! double post...
oops! double post...
g3mini00
sarNie Juvenile
i wonder who will pair up with RITA. or you'd like to keep this as a secret?
i think tik is better. since tik has already stopped filming new drama for a long time, maybe we will never have chances to see him with these popular actresses in lakorns. making fanfic is the best way to make our dream come true.
i think tik is better. since tik has already stopped filming new drama for a long time, maybe we will never have chances to see him with these popular actresses in lakorns. making fanfic is the best way to make our dream come true.
hanjieun30
sarNie OldFart
I wasn't satisfied with the 1st chapter so I decided to change it... the other one started off with Aff only and I was not contented with it... here's the new chapter 1! enjoy! ^_^
Chapter 1
The moment the 3 ladies stepped out from the car, the flashing of cameras became wild! The cameras followed their every move, all wanting to take pictures of the 3 important women tonight. At the entrance of the newly opened and most anticipated bar and restaurant in Bangkok, the three ladies stood, arms wrapped around each others’ waist and flashing their most beautiful smiles.
The February Ladies. That’s what people call them. Three women all born on the same month and day. The three of them met in kindergarten and instantly became the best of friends. As years go by, their friendship becomes stronger. Before, they were only known as heiresses of the 3 big tycoons of Bangkok but now, they have made names for themselves.
Less Than 40, the February Ladies’ newest business venture had been officially opened tonight. Since their families are well-known, it’s no wonder people from the media had flocked to take pictures and interview them.
Standing on the left is Ann Thongprasom, daughter of Aran Thongprasom. Coming from a family of film directors and producers, she is hailed as one of most talented young film makers today. Although she works in the show business, she’s still not accustomed of the attention she’s been getting tonight.
The one in the middle is Rita Jensen. This gorgeous but gullible lady is the favorite daughter of business tycoon, Niran Jensen. Formerly a model, she decided to leave the runway and put up a business with her best friends. “Princess�, as what her father calls her, gets everything she wants. Princess told her daddy that she and her friends wanted to open a bar and restaurant. Without hesitation, her father gave her the money she needed, he even added more!.
Last but not the least is Aff Taksaorn, daughter of the owner of Thailand’s largest business in the car industry, Arthit Taksaorn. A doctor slash business woman (handling over 4 businesses at the same time), she still finds time to take a break be with her best friends.
Pictures were taken, people from the show business and business industries congratulated them and interviews were made, it was one hell tiring night but it was a very successful one. When everyone was already enjoying themselves, the February Ladies went inside the VIP room so they can have a little chitchat.
“The place is packed!� Aff exclaimed after drinking a shot vodka. She poured more on her shot glass.
“Yes, it’s a success.� Rita agreed, while also pouring a shot of vodka.
“Aff, don’t drink too much. I don’t want to see you doing a strip tease on the dance floor later.� Ann reminded her. Since Aff hated being reminded, especially when it comes to her alcohol intake, she rolled her eyes in response. Whenever Aff gets drunk, she usually acts very wild.
Aff turned her direction back to Rita.
“Hey bitch! Where’s your man? He already broke up with you?� Aff was asking Rita. These silly girls have special nicknames for each other.
“John is in Tokyo right now for a business trip.� Rita explained. What she didn’t know that her boyfriend is cheating on her, again. John is actually meeting her other girl in Phuket.
“Business trip my ass! You believe in everything he tells you? He’s probably moaning and panting with his other girl by now.� Aff told her. She knew that this John that Rita is dating is a major playboy.
“His other girl is probably giving him a blow job by now!� Ann blurted out, wanting to join the conversation. Rita looked at her friends furiously while Aff was laughing so hard.
“Nice one, Ann. I love you, whore!� Aff told Ann and blew a kiss.
“Love you too, slut!� She also blew a kiss to Aff.
“Now, now… Bitch, let’s just enjoy the night and don’t think of John too much.� Ann said as she poured more liquor on their shot glasses. They raised their glasses and made a toss for the success of their business. After drinking, they heard someone outside, shouting.
“BITCH! SLUT! WHORE! I'M HERE!!!!� The voice was so loud and deafening. It sounded like a bad quality sound system!
“Oh…My…God! Who invited him?!� Rita exclaimed. The sound of the voice that they were hearing right now made her rage in fury. Ann turned her direction to Aff who was now grinning. Guilty of the crime she did.
---TBC---
the other one started off with Aff only and I was not contented with it... here's the new chapter 1! enjoy! ^_^ Chapter 1
The moment the 3 ladies stepped out from the car, the flashing of cameras became wild! The cameras followed their every move, all wanting to take pictures of the 3 important women tonight. At the entrance of the newly opened and most anticipated bar and restaurant in Bangkok, the three ladies stood, arms wrapped around each others’ waist and flashing their most beautiful smiles.
The February Ladies. That’s what people call them. Three women all born on the same month and day. The three of them met in kindergarten and instantly became the best of friends. As years go by, their friendship becomes stronger. Before, they were only known as heiresses of the 3 big tycoons of Bangkok but now, they have made names for themselves.
Less Than 40, the February Ladies’ newest business venture had been officially opened tonight. Since their families are well-known, it’s no wonder people from the media had flocked to take pictures and interview them.
Standing on the left is Ann Thongprasom, daughter of Aran Thongprasom. Coming from a family of film directors and producers, she is hailed as one of most talented young film makers today. Although she works in the show business, she’s still not accustomed of the attention she’s been getting tonight.
The one in the middle is Rita Jensen. This gorgeous but gullible lady is the favorite daughter of business tycoon, Niran Jensen. Formerly a model, she decided to leave the runway and put up a business with her best friends. “Princess�, as what her father calls her, gets everything she wants. Princess told her daddy that she and her friends wanted to open a bar and restaurant. Without hesitation, her father gave her the money she needed, he even added more!.
Last but not the least is Aff Taksaorn, daughter of the owner of Thailand’s largest business in the car industry, Arthit Taksaorn. A doctor slash business woman (handling over 4 businesses at the same time), she still finds time to take a break be with her best friends.
Pictures were taken, people from the show business and business industries congratulated them and interviews were made, it was one hell tiring night but it was a very successful one. When everyone was already enjoying themselves, the February Ladies went inside the VIP room so they can have a little chitchat.
“The place is packed!� Aff exclaimed after drinking a shot vodka. She poured more on her shot glass.
“Yes, it’s a success.� Rita agreed, while also pouring a shot of vodka.
“Aff, don’t drink too much. I don’t want to see you doing a strip tease on the dance floor later.� Ann reminded her. Since Aff hated being reminded, especially when it comes to her alcohol intake, she rolled her eyes in response. Whenever Aff gets drunk, she usually acts very wild.
Aff turned her direction back to Rita.
“Hey bitch! Where’s your man? He already broke up with you?� Aff was asking Rita. These silly girls have special nicknames for each other.
“John is in Tokyo right now for a business trip.� Rita explained. What she didn’t know that her boyfriend is cheating on her, again. John is actually meeting her other girl in Phuket.
“Business trip my ass! You believe in everything he tells you? He’s probably moaning and panting with his other girl by now.� Aff told her. She knew that this John that Rita is dating is a major playboy.
“His other girl is probably giving him a blow job by now!� Ann blurted out, wanting to join the conversation. Rita looked at her friends furiously while Aff was laughing so hard.
“Nice one, Ann. I love you, whore!� Aff told Ann and blew a kiss.
“Love you too, slut!� She also blew a kiss to Aff.
“Now, now… Bitch, let’s just enjoy the night and don’t think of John too much.� Ann said as she poured more liquor on their shot glasses. They raised their glasses and made a toss for the success of their business. After drinking, they heard someone outside, shouting.
“BITCH! SLUT! WHORE! I'M HERE!!!!� The voice was so loud and deafening. It sounded like a bad quality sound system!
“Oh…My…God! Who invited him?!� Rita exclaimed. The sound of the voice that they were hearing right now made her rage in fury. Ann turned her direction to Aff who was now grinning. Guilty of the crime she did.
---TBC---
transcend89
sarNie Adult
the old chapter was fine for me but after reading this one it's good too i think you could've gone either way with the first ch. aff character in the old chapter was really fun and joyable. i don't know the nicknames are a little too harsh.
lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
I thought the first chapter was fine the way it was.. but whatever makes you happy. As for the nick names, hmm.... I dunno.. I thought these women were working professionals, but then again... I don't have a group of friends like that, so I don't know what they call eachother. ahh well... let's see what happens next.
hanjieun30
sarNie OldFart
I know that some of you would find their nicknames a little harsh but I just want to add a little spice... they don't call each other like that when they're in public... don't worry, I won't be using their nicknames throughout WHOLE story...
they don't call each other like that when they're in public... don't worry, I won't be using their nicknames throughout WHOLE story... hanjieun30
sarNie OldFart
I think I shall come up with better nicknames for them... just now, I find it a little harsh myself too... :loool: the bitch nickname stays though... my sister and I calls each other "bitch" all the time...
lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
donna.. lol.. we call eachother bitch too... hey, but you are such a sweet writer.. you're always changing stuff for your readers! well.. keep them coming.. I'll be here waiting.
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
cool chapter....i love how 3 successful ladies and still find time to hang out....lol this reminds me of sex in the city....lol
hanjieun30
sarNie OldFart
^ got the concept of this story from sex and the city!
got the concept of this story from sex and the city!hanjieun30
sarNie OldFart
aaawww... lome called me sweet... :wub: the last time someone called me sweet was soooo long ago!donna.. lol.. we call eachother bitch too... hey, but you are such a sweet writer.. you're always changing stuff for your readers! well.. keep them coming.. I'll be here waiting.
since some of you find the nicknames harsh, I decided to change it...
anyhow, the real Rita (Rita's character is based on a real person which is my friend!) called me up a while ago and by telling her little story to me, I was inspired to write the next chapter!
iluvnumandoil
sarNie OldFart
great chap, i also like the first one